About Love Within

I wanted to take a few minutes to tell you why I changed the original poem. It was very abstract. after reading my instructors critique I decided to add more imagery to this Poem. I enjoyed the first one as it was just simple and to the fact of what I felt from with in me. But now I tried to describe a deeper meaning.

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